Personal Statement Editing ($225)
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Joann is grateful for these anonymous testimonials from past customers:
Revision Editing was instrumental in my law school applications. This service got me in to my first choice law school and I could not be happier.
Revision Editing is amazing. My personal statement needed a lot more work than I thought, and I would recommend it to anyone applying to law school.
Despite an LSAT score at my first choice's 25th percentile, I was admitted, thanks in part to a strong personal statement, and achieved my goal of attending a "T14" law school
Revision editing provided the extra 'punch' that was missing from my application. It's true, that, without a good essay, you're just a set of statistics to an admissions committee. I highly recommend using this service.
Revision Editing provided specific and insightful suggestions to turn a very strong personal statement into an outstanding one. I am certain it made a difference in my application.
RE was exceptional in both delivery and commentary on my written work. Sensitivity to detail while respecting the flow and message of the whole candidate were at the core of every comment and suggestion. Outstanding!
I would highly recommend this website to students interested in law school. Joann is very thorough in her analysis and able to provide personal touches that are worth the extra money.
Other pre-law advisors are against assisting applicants who are not heterosexual. I think your example essays though make it clear that you don't discriminate on the basis of sexual orientation.
I am ashamed to admit I paid nearly 6x what you charge when I applied [to law school] as a 0L. That online advisor has a JD, MBA, and LLM from a T14. But the value of your assistance is over 10x greater than anything I received from him. Whether or not I am successful in the transfer process, I am very grateful for your help. I see this as a great exercise on improving my writing skills.
I sent Joann what I thought was a pretty good essay, and with her revisions I was able to turn it into a great one. Thanks in big part to her expertise, I was able to get into all of my top choices and I'll be attending Harvard Law next fall. Thanks SO much!
Joann took extreme care with my essays. She was very thorough, not only with the essays themselves but also with the comments/recommendations she left for me. She always preserved my original thoughts and ideas, but refined them and made my writing clearer overall. Her recommendations were always thoughtful and on point. By the time I had used the service, I had already asked a current law student and two other friends in graduate school to edit them. Although their advice was valuable, Joann pointed out things that my peers didn't come close to addressing. I think having someone with so much experience--especially with law school specific essays--made a huge difference.